Advocate - Runnin' Freestyle

[Advocate]

Rukas's track "I'm Comin'" inspired this because i couldn't resist spitting on the beat.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/advocatemusic.htm

replied to DChes and Rukas

hate it or love it
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[S O F I]

^Did he inspire you because for example, he was whack on it? Or, did he inspire you because he for example, ripped it better than Game and Tony Yayo? Or...

Anyways, it'd be better if you tried to use more emotion when spitting, use some more intensity. Some bars could use shortening up. Overall, not bad. I like the line with "black sedan" and something something. That flowed really well. Also, you have a strange accent to me, I don't know. Not bad strange, just strange.

 

[SkitzoFreniak]

hmm not sure about this one , emotion isnt wut it needs , sum
parts u slur and sum parts ur lines are too short, i like the part
towards the end of the track best , the lyrics are pretty
good , nice punches at times , so yeah has sum potential
but this wusnt ur best , pz

 

[imported_MAKaveli_10]

I love this line " Im white so to 5-0 Im camoulflaged" Thats nice. U dont seem to show any emotion on this freestyle. And in a freestyle you need that. Its still a nice freestyle and I love this beat.

 

[Ant]

This is ok, I wouldn't mind having ago at this beat one time... seems everyone is though so I'll keep that on hold.

Flow towards the start is kindof off. Man that line about camouflaged from the 5-0 is fucking brilliant, loved that. I like the way just constantly flowing throughout this, I love it when people do that, sweet. Towards the end this becomes some real hpt shit. :thumb:

I'm definately feeling your stuff man keep it up.

 

[Advocate]

thanks all... i realize im a pretty monotone spitter, its just me

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[Emma]

I love that beat :thumb:
Like most other people said there's not much emotion. But I like your flow in some bits, although in other bits it was a lil off. Nice drop tho I like it

 

[S O F I]

thanks all... i realize im a pretty monotone spitter, its just me

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Well, it's nothing you can't change.

 

[Chronic]

I've heard other shit by you and I remember you having a better flow. Whole thing was pretty messy. Lyrics were okay. 0:36-0:50 sounds like some racist shit lol.
I don't mind the monotone flow, I think it sounds good, just gotta get the flow right.

 

[Advocate]

okay. 0:36-0:50 sounds like some racist shit lol.

yeah i feel you, but it really isn't, police brutality isn't only practiced against minorities, definetly more controversy around it though

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thanks all for peeping track, and emma lol i didn't even know that you entered the drop zone

 

[Advocate]

Well, it's nothing you can't change.

you really think so? it's just what comes naturally to my voice i guess, i've tried to put emotion into it and people still tell me it sounds monotone

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[S O F I]

^You got it in you. You just need to let go, be confident when you spit. My advice is, bump some music, get really pumped up, then do a raw track. See if there's a difference.

Btw, I didn't get repped for giving you feedback.

 

[Mase]

Okay, Runnin beat again. You have some nice punchlines, but the track sounds like you are suffocating the whole time. This kind of destroys your flow, and at random times like Chronic said you are messy. The lyrics are very good and I like the length compared to Rukas's version. Half way through it sounds like you are a bit lazy then you start flowing better again. There are some things you could of fixed up, quality is good and I like your voice.
3.5/5

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beat is good again. Flow is real sloppy though, ya need 2 slow it down and ride the beat...u speed it up 2 much and it jumbles up the flow. Middle of the track gets real jumbled...sounds like you just talking with the beat behind you. Delivery was pretty decent...could use a bit more feeling but its pretty solid. Lyrics were OK....u need 2 work on ur breathe control a lot though, especially since you ain't doing no backs to hide them breathin. Some of the pronounciation needs work 2, overall it was clear but some parts you cant hear the words 2 good. Alright drop...u really gotta work on breathe control then ur flow should fall into place better.

Peace

 

[Advocate]

whats "no backs to hide them breathing"

 

[Bigg Limn]

backing vocals, also known as "adlibs" or whatever other people call em.

 

[S O F I]

^How do you go about doing that? Do you rap over the acapella you have already, or...?

 

[Bigg Limn]

Well with the recording software you use you should be able to make different tracks (IE: one for the beat, one for the vocals). Just make another track, and yeah - rap over the main vocals you've already laid.

 

[haunted]

I liked it, i dont mind the "non emotional" flow. It just seems like you go off beat a little and rap kinda fast at certain times.

Also where is the bass? Is that how it is on the original beat?

 

[Rukas]

You know I love the beat .

I like your take on it, you went down a different path than I or Game did. Lyrics were good, props on flowing for so long. You went off beat here and there but it was enjoyable.

Quality lacks the professional shine but its decent enough for a freestyle type track.

Props.