Delinquint -- Future Diss

[Delinquint]

Replied to Future-Take It Off and Limn-Musics All I Got

Diss song to Future. Enjoy.

http://www.soundclick.com/util/downloadSong.cfm?ID=2221679&key=538066A5-A

 

[jeremy_]

nice beat and really nice flow.

 

[crittaz]

not feelin the beat. not feelin ur voice, sounds too soft for a diss track. i dont like the delivery. as far as delivery goes, its good. and u are on point. its just my own personal preference about the sound of ur voice. but i do think u need to be a little more agressive. lyrics were pretty nice too. keep droppin and improving.

 

[Delinquint]

Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated

 

[alkaholik_151]

nice beat, but you gotta work on the flow....just sounds too soft for a diss track, good job otherwise though.......1

 

[Razorblade]

You're not really bringing the heat with this, your best line is probably "what the future holds for you is absolutley nothing" because it's the only real personal diss I can pick up on. Apart from that it's general shit talk which is all good but if you really want to bring it to him, you want to attack him rather than use gun talk.
Nice beat, flow could be a little more varied and you could do with a little more emotion in your voice otherwise the track can become uninteresting.
Keep at it man.

 

[Advocate]

i was going to diss him too. lol
after hearing all that "chea" "chea" over the MC beat.

anyways man fuck what these people above me say. i think its hot. i just think you need to turn up your vocals, and you have a pretty consistent track. flow is tight. to make it a real diss you should incorporate a few more punches.

but its dope

word
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[Delinquint]

thanks for all your feedback...It was acctually written and recorded awhile ago and I forgot to put it up back then...and then i saw all these stupid tracks hes puttin up so I figured i'd just throw it up there...theres another one I did with Negative D but I think i'm just gonna make a quick new one. Again, thanks for all the feedback.