I Wish I Could See You Again (RIP GPA)

[JRubb]

responded to limn and rukas

i recorded this awhile, jus want some criticism on it. its for my grandpa who recently died, hope ya'll like it

www.soundclick.com/jrubb

i wish i could see you again ft emma lee

 

[Y G B youngbugzy]

you got a good flow...also good production...really clear.
I like the hook,ol gurls voice is off the dope!
The beat is lay back bangin shit too..NO disrespect but it sounds a lil cheesey in the start tho..the intro...my opinion..the rest is dope i can fel it..wokin at the scrap yard and not gettin paidd..shit i been there..lol..
good track..
~1~

 

[Sith Angel]

The production was clear and smooth.
The beat fits the song theme perfectly, nice choice.
You got nice delivery and the lyrics were on point.
The hook, dame. Girl can sing. How did you huck up with her?

I think Y G B was kinda right about the intro.
It fits in with the song but I think it would have sounded better at the end of the track.

It’s like, saying the punch line to a joke before telling the joke, if you know what I mean?
You need to set up the song first then drop the big finish.
That intro part was filled with so mush emotion; it would have made a dame good finish to the track.

Anyway, in whole it was a nice track. It's the first time I've heard from you and I hope this won't be the last time you drop a track.
Dame nice work. I find it's always good to release pain thru music.
So I can respect the theme and the concept of the song.
I feel your lost.
Stay up and keep the drops coming.
Pz

PS Holla back on my drop.

 

[JRubb]

thanks for the replies, uppin

 

[Authentic]

I really enjoy this track. Songs like this are my favs because they are what's real. No doubt you've talent. Keep the work up, man. Your quality is good, and you have good mic presence. Same with the girl singing. This was some good production, and tracks like this should be noticed more often than all of that gangster ish. Keep your heart up, man ... sorry about the lost. Be peaceful ...

 

[JRubb]

yo man thanks alot, i really appreciate it. im glad u liked the song, it means alot to me but it even means more with this song, i poured my heart into it... thanks again

 

[Cooper]

Like it a lot...u make the beat?