JeSTAR - Big City of Dreams

[jeremy_]

replied to crittaz and tru principle

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/jestar_music.htm

'Big City of Dreams', its the top track.

let me know what you think.

 

[Sith Angel]

Sup
I’m feeling the beat. Some old Hip-Hop style shit. Nice choice.
The flow is choppy in parts but it’s something that can be worked on.
Lyrics, some nice bars.
Talking about the people who died last week in the bombs. I like that.

Q, it sounds like you need to turn up the vocals a little and maybe. Turn up the highs and turn down the lows on the EQ.
But it sounds like a nice track.
Keep it up.

Holla back on my new shit

 

[Pain Of Depth]

nice beat , the drums should be perfect to flow on tho' , wich I hear a bit , but still ur flow can use work imo ...

turn the vocals up indeed
nice track ...

pz

 

[HipHop77]

beatz dope, turn ur wordz up then it'll b aiight

 

[Ant]

Nice track. I liked the beat. Common and Kanye did a better job but what you expect? haha. I like the lyrics. Your voice is pretty nice too, good sound. Maybe could put more emotion in though. Good topic and that. Nice drop.

 

[MATW95]

I like your subject matter but your flow needs to be a little cleaned up. Stop and Go is something that normally works for deeper sounding voices. I understand that that may have been the way to ride the beat, but if that was the case, then this may not have been the beat to spit over.

Keep working though, that's important.

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beats real nice, sounds a bit low quality tho. Flow is on point, but sounds a bit basic if U know what I mean. Damn that breakdown is FUCKING NICE! haha i woulda had 2 do some shit over that 2 go w/ it. Lyrics r pretty straight 2...a bit basicly structured 2 though. Everythings pretty much on point - I'd just work on bringing up the caliber of ur flow and lyrics now to perfect everything. U shoulda ended the track how U did, then brought back in that drum break for a bit then faded it

pz

 

[andari]

its cool but track your sound so that they are all on pace

 

[devils_advok8]

Tight track, you should work on the quality though and flow fell off at some parts.Other than that, I couldnt think of anything negative to say.Keep up the good work.

 

[Malicious Jynx]

The flow was decent, like homeboy said above it was kind of choppy.....but it will come to you in time if u really serious wit this.........Lyricism was good also....you got nice potential.........stay up and stay working man thats all u need to do and you'll be where you wanna be in no time.

 

[SLIm]

recognized the instrumental right off the start.
good quality vocals and once they are bumped up they will be good.
i like how you had the beak that you just let ride and didnt put anything on it.
lyrics are good because they are timely.
I would work on the flow though.

 

[Shot 21]

Lovin the message of the song. Nice beat and lyrics. I actually liked the flow. The only thing is your voice sounds kinda weird. Almost like it has an Australian tinge to it. Keep up the good work though.

 

[jeremy_]

Lovin the message of the song. Nice beat and lyrics. I actually liked the flow. The only thing is your voice sounds kinda weird. Almost like it has an Australian tinge to it. Keep up the good work though.

from New Zealand =)

Thanks for the feedback everyone.

Posting from Solvakia, have been travelling in Eastern Europe for a few months. Will drop some more material when i get back to New Zealand in December.

 

[BiggerL]

the song is good. Your voice sounds pretty nice over the beat, lyrics were nothing complicated but what you were saying was real so it didn't need to be. Ended of real nice...!