JeSTAR- Day After Day (Soundclick)

#2
beat is nice man , flow u used wus pretty basic but
it worked well for this beat , but this isnt even
a finished song so finish it up first man , wut u have so
far is okay
 
#3
SkitzoFreniak said:
beat is nice man , flow u used wus pretty basic but
it worked well for this beat , but this isnt even
a finished song so finish it up first man , wut u have so
far is okay
beat is by Eminem. From 'Til the End' by Lloyd Banks.

It is finished - was never going to be a whole song, just a verse i needed to express.
 

Bigg Limn

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#6
Beat's nice, Eminem actually sounded a bit different on this beat...didn't think he could do it. Flow is on point again, but its still a bit stiff. Lyrics were pretty simple on this one, not really vibin 2 the subject matter 2 much tho. Vocal levels R better on this one, was easier 2 catch the lines. Work on ur delivery and the complexity of your lyrics a bit and ur shit will be that much tighter.

Peace
 

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