JeSTAR - How Much Will We Change?

[jeremy_]

Here is a track off my next EP.

It will not be released for a few weeks so please let me know if you think any bits should be rerecorded.

Its called 'How Much Will We Change?'

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=508198

- replied to alkaholik_151 and future -

 

[jeremy_]

I have posted in another four threads, now how about one of you reply to mine?

 

[Min]

i like the lyrics... flow is aaight... beat needs to be changes...if not all then intro definetly... do it with out cuts...and chorus doesn't sound good eather..... should try some other style or i dont liek even lyrics of chorus...

beautifull morning.. nice beat i love it... verses are good but i miss chorus... track is done or its only rearview of whati t will be...definetly aint done to me...

you the same jeremy from 2pacboard?

 

[Shot 21]

Not liking the intro much, but the beat gets better when it kicks in. Sicc flow. Your voice sounds different than typical rappers. I like that. Its unique. The chorus is brilliant. Nice shit you spittin here. Never heard anyone touch on that subject before. Good content.

Overall Im feeling this. Nice drop, keep going.

 

[jeremy_]

beautifull morning.. nice beat i love it... verses are good but i miss chorus... track is done or its only rearview of whati t will be...definetly aint done to me...

you the same jeremy from 2pacboard?

Thanks for your feedback. I am the same jeremy from hitemup and 2pacboard...

A sung chorus has been added to Beautiful Morning this weekend and is up on my soundclick. I hope you like it!

 

[malek_5]

i really like the beat, actually, it's sick. it would be cool to switch up the flow a little bit during the song, maybe pause the beat for a real solid line.

 

[jeremy_]

i really like the beat, actually, it's sick. it would be cool to switch up the flow a little bit during the song, maybe pause the beat for a real solid line.

Thanks, that pause is a great idea. Will give it a go next weekend.

 

[Min]

ye it does sound better...but still not the best chorus... but definetly nicer then nothing...

hey nice to know man...long time no seen....

 

[alkaholik_151]

Whaddup man, youve improved big time since I last heard ur stuff. This tracks decent, nice improvents on beautiful morning!

keep it up......1

 

[Rukas]

Im not really feeling the beat, Id turn the base down a little bit.

Your flow is on point but a bit flat and repetative Id switch it up like someone else suggested on here.

The hook is catchy but needs to stand out from the verses more.

Really feeling the content though, over all its a good track Im j

Im just being real picky to show you where you can improve on.

Keep it up.

 

[Bigg Limn]

Im with Rukas on the beat...bass is a bit overpowering. Flows on point, but still basic U need to elevate it - same w/ ur delivery; again like Rukas said its 2 repetetive. My response is pretty much the same as Rukas. I dont mean 2 be harsh but Uve been doin this 4 a minute and this is an amateurs flow. U got the lyrical content down, now U need 2 flex the rest of ya game.