JeSTAR - This Frequency (Feat. Keren)

[jeremy_]

Replied to: Mark Deez, bigCASH, Kareem and LinX`

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/jestarmusic.htm

This is the title track off my first EP.

Let me know what you think of the track!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/jestarmusic.htm

This Frequency (Feat. Keren)

 

[imported_MAKaveli_10]

I really like this song. I think the beat is perfect for this song. The beat is really laid back. I love the message of this song. Very good song. Your rhymes are pretty good and flow is mostly solid. I think the chorus is pretty good but I would recommened that you say the chorus and change it up a little bit. Overall this track is really good. Thats a 9.5 out fo 10. Beautiful track.

 

[Bigg Limn]

Another nice piano melody, but again the drums R a let down. Flow is solid, lyrics R a bit weak though. Hook is nice, she's on point unlike that last singer. Its a bit empty though. Track was pretty solid, but the lyrics R a bit 2 simple - try working on more complex rhyme schemes nad that'll step ur game up a lot more. And if you're making the beats or know who is...try switching up the drum patterns and making them fit the beat more, ur melodies R always nice but the drums sound 2 clubbish they don't really mesh with the melody. Keep elevatin though.

Peace

 

[linx]

A dope piano melody indeed. I feel what Limn is saying about the drums too. The singing was really nice too, I was definitely feeling that. Limn also hit it on the head about your lyrics also. Step that up a bit. Overall not a bad song though. Pretty dope message and all that. Keep doing it man.

 

[malek_5]

The intro is dope. The piano beat is a little soft, but I guess that's what you were going for. It just seems like the lyrics are trying to be harder than they should be for this beat. I don't know if the lyrics are the problem though, I think it's more the flow that needs work. It sounds like you didn't write this to the beat. Your flow is the same through the whole song, it would be hot to experiment with some internal rhymes too.

 

[jeremy_]

thanks for all the feedback!