Kiss Of Death

Tru Principle

Tru Principle

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#2
#2
some gangsta shit homie, some real street shit. Quality could use some improvement but never the less nice track. I would work on the delivery but I think with better quality you'll find it easier to do. keep on workin' man.
 
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Zom-B

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#3
#3
Tru Principle said:
some gangsta shit homie, some real street shit. Quality could use some improvement but never the less nice track. I would work on the delivery but I think with better quality you'll find it easier to do. keep on workin' man.
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Like my homie just said. I think u flow great and the lyrics are dope but U could work on the delivery how u present it..but at the same time its dope the way it is...Keep doin ya thang man..
 
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Hussein Da Don

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#4
#4
good looks my niggaz....really appreciate it man....I do my shit for the streets nah mean....Im improvin my shit I work hard and take this shit serious cuz.....Like Pac said im push untill I hit the top...I just began
 
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Razorblade

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#8
#8
You work the beat well; good voice, solid delivery but there's something missing; I lose interest in it really easy. Take a listen to "Baltimore love thing"; I dunno what it is that 50 does to keep it going but you're lackin somethin on this one.
Solid effort tho
 
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Sith Angel

New Member
#10
#10
your really rocking this beat bro. You do have a real cool sounding voice. Your delivery is nice, but I agree with Razorblade, it sounds like, it sounds like you need to switch up your style.
sticking to the same bar spitting style for every single bar will get boring after awhile. feel me? But maybe if you just add a layer of backing vocals and change the pitch of your voice. maybe that make it sound different.
I don't know, you got a tite style but it just seems like there’s just something missing.

I get the same feeling when I listen to my old songs from backing in '99 to 2001.
I was a hot rapper even then but compared to now, there's no contest. Feel me?
I think that element of your style that is missing, the one thing that'll make you sound like a real hot mc ...is time.
Keep writing, Keep grinding, keep working on making your flow and style tite and your blazing. trust me.
This is the first time I've heard anything from you but honestly, I would love to hear some more bro, keep it up.

Pz
 
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