Let Me - (Ft Dre/Coby/Trip)

[crittaz]

New soong! replied to ghettostar and waycide
did the best i could to cut up the beat and make it a little bit longer. vocal quality cant do much about it but its the best i can do with my equipment.

Dre is on the hook.
1st Verse: Dre
2nd Verse: Coby
3rd Verse: Trip
4th Verse: Crittaz.. had to finish up the last little verse

any criticism is appreciated good or bad
next song will be fire. feel it in the air instrumental

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[Shot 21]

I love this beat. Cool to spit on. Not a fan of the chorus. First guy sicc flow, weak lyrics. Flow weakens a bit near the end. Like 2nd guys voice. Nice flow again. Better lyrics. 3rd guy comes on good although the flow is a bit wavery. NIce lyrics. Really dont like that chorus. Probably the voice. Dont sound right. You also come on good. Sicc flow. You didnt spit much though!!

Altogether the flow of that song stands out the most.

Beanie Sigel - Feel It In The Air? Love that beat! Cant wait.

 

[Hymnz]

good overall i have to say

 

[Advocate]

tight beat, really not feeling the first guy, his verse or the hook. he kind of doesnt pull of the back it up back it up some more. second guy has some tight delievery, tight voice for the beat. so far all lyrics are clubbing. in all honesty i want to just skip to your verse. liking your verse the best, but personally im not feeling it as much as all your other shit. flow is pretty tight man.

one love
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[crittaz]

thanks for the comments upping

 

[Minardi]

I like the beat too.
first guy delivers an OK flow, sounds abit boring to me, also sounds like he goes away from the mic, makes me loose focus from the track

I dont really like the chorus, dont ask me why

2nd verse sounds nice, flows onspot and i like the delivery, best verse on the track for me.

3rd reminds me alittle of Lloyd banks with the way he twist the words, flows onspot to, solid verse.

4th, sounds alittle like you loose the flow at one part, but not much though, delivery is nice too, and the 2nd best verse on track IMO.

solid track but theres really nothing standing out for me on it. 6/10

 

[crittaz]

^^ thanks a lot for listening and leaving criticism. the new track is almost done btw. this ones deep. if u not feelin the club kinda thing too much this one is straight hip hop. anyway thanks again.

 

[Minardi]

^^ thanks a lot for listening and leaving criticism. the new track is almost done btw. this ones deep. if u not feelin the club kinda thing too much this one is straight hip hop. anyway thanks again.

Aight ill check it when its up.
And yeah i think you hit the nail about that clubbin stuff
not that i dont like club tracks, theres just lots of em these days