Limn - "Dear Father" [snippet]

[Bigg Limn]

Another new track Im working on. Letter 2 God typa shit. Prolly keeping solo. Enjoy until the full version.

Peace

http://www.soundclick.com/pro/default.cfm?BandID=185375&content=music
http://www.soundclick.com/pro/default.cfm?BandID=185375&content=music

 

[Razorblade]

Love the beat; you flow amazin on it.
Lyrics are deep; there's not a bad bar in that, I especially like:

I stopped believing because I refused to believe a facade

I look forward to hearing the full song, you really express your emotions well. Good drop.

If you could see your way to returning the favour:
http://www.2pacboard.com/forum/thread138930.html

 

[Bigg Limn]

Godammit I know ya'll listening why cant U gimme some criticism!?

[thanks 2 razor 4 both,appreciated]

 

[Quasimodo]

you know i love the track, limn, definitely feelin the flow... always feelin the content.. i'd love to jump on it. if you wanna keep it solo, let me know, but i laid some shit to planet of pain, its hot, trust me on that... you're gonna feel it

 

[Lok]

Nice Flow, kinda like Commons. Cool beat as well. You shuold drop the whole song.

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[Amara]

I thought you delivered a bit too fast actually, especially considering how slow and controlled the beat was. With a louder but slower flow, I think you'd make better sense of the lyrics so they are no overpowered by the beat... (but like i said before, what do i know).

 

[Bigg Limn]

blah stop saying that. But if I get what you're saying, that may be due to the fact that the verse was new so I wasn't too flawless with it yet. I'm almost finished with the track, so we'll C if what you're talking about changed. If not...then I dunno what you're talking about lol. But thanks for peeping...what'd you think about the song besides that?

 

[Ant]

Aight.. beat's nice on this track. I love the way you can sound nice and laid back when you going at pace. Definately something to lay back too this, my favourite kind of track.

Lyrical content is where this shines. Some of the things you said it this is pretty much exactly my thaughts/beliefs so I can definately hear this.

And those 4 bars you got in your sig. are very nice, internals and multis very much on point.

I would definately like to hear the full track and I'm glad to see that your quality in tearms of sound is back to the niceness it was, it just gives the track that extra class. Keep dropping heat, Limn.

 

[Pain Of Depth]

what are "sedatives"?

pz

 

[Bigg Limn]

Damnit stop posting in the snippet thread, check out the full! lol

Sedatives=Pain killers

 

[Bigg Limn]

On 2nd thought, this thread is closed - and the full version thread is upped.