Mark Deez & Kid Teck - The Phantom

#1
http://www.myspace.com/markdeez

its the 1st track that comes up

its called the phantom. it features a philly rapper named kid teck. he and i are doing a collab album together called north meets south, so be on the lookout, its comin soon.

1st verse - mark deez
2nd verse - mark deez
3rd verse - kid teck
hook - mark deez

drop some feedback, i'll be sure to rep you
 
#2
It's a tight beat but it's too loud and overpowers your vocals but it is a damn nice beat and fits the song really well.
...couldn't write tight shit if they stuck their hand in a vice grip...
Nice line that just jumped out at me.
Flow seems tight enough, falters here and there but I think that's more to do with either too many syllables in a bar or (maybe) you're reading the lyrics right off the page. Speaking of which, the lyrics are hot; intense stuff.
Flow on the second verse is much better but it still sounds a little like you're reading the lyrics out more than spitting them at times.

Kid Teck's vocals definitly need lifted but his flow seems tight and his lyrics are hot.

Good drop; just needs the levels tweaked. That beat is awesome!

Check out the song I'm about to drop; it's called "Through My Earphones"
 

Dante

Meyer & Dante Best Friends4eva
#4
sheesh, do you ever talk about anything but how dope you are?
ironically, you're not.


please stop killing hip hop. it has to start somewhere. let it start with you. please.

 

SiGh

Who's there?
Staff member
#6
Dante said:
sheesh, do you ever talk about anything but how dope you are?
ironically, you're not.


please stop killing hip hop. it has to start somewhere. let it start with you. please.

LMFAO!!! :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
i fell out my chair when i seen this post.
 

Dante

Meyer & Dante Best Friends4eva
#14
Mark Deez said:
dante isn't worth my time, he doesn't deserve a diss track
the truth is that you're incapable of rapping about anything besides your homework and how rad you are, mister emcee speedbag.
 
#16
well lets hear you spit somethin dante, i don't hear you droppin shit. shouldn't you be lubing yourself with jergens and fantasizing about all of your unheard 2pac tracks? you're the only person on here that gives me shit for rappin. idc what the fuck you think. you're one person out of billions. you're incapable of understanding that i just don't give a fuck. diss me. put me down. say i can't rap... it doesn't do anything but make me wanna make more music.
 

Dante

Meyer & Dante Best Friends4eva
#18
Mark Deez said:
well lets hear you spit somethin dante, i don't hear you droppin shit. shouldn't you be lubing yourself with jergens and fantasizing about all of your unheard 2pac tracks? you're the only person on here that gives me shit for rappin. idc what the fuck you think. you're one person out of billions. you're incapable of understanding that i just don't give a fuck. diss me. put me down. say i can't rap... it doesn't do anything but make me wanna make more music.
deep down, very deep, in the darkest corners of your psyche you know that you are inadequate as an emcee. it is my desire to bring these thoughts to the foreground and save the planet by ending your career before you sign to mc trailpark and dj trucker hat's fledgling label.

i give everyone a chance... i just have to say that your raps are ghastly. if you really really want to hear my sexy, sultry voice, then you need only find out which two complations i appeared on in 1998 and again in 1999. hint, they were both distributed worldwide and received enough acclaim for several of our performers to go on to the majors.

that being said, i'm not challenging you. i'm pleading with you. i am on my knees begging with salty tears stinging my cheeks as i type this. please. please! puhleeeze make it stop. only you have the power, you muppet.
 

Dante

Meyer & Dante Best Friends4eva
#20
Mark Deez said:
i'll never stop, never. only because you want me to, dante. hate on me all you want, but i'll make sure that you never forget me. remember that.
well your avatar has already accomplished that, friend
 

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