my two singles

[Sarr]

havent posted here for awhile...anyway, here are my two tracks...ill repay the favour to anybody who checks my shit out and leaves feedback;

http://rapidshare.de/files/5384816/Sarr_-_Try_Me__Master_.mp3.html

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thats the street single

http://rapidshare.de/files/5384907/Sarr_ft.Ruth_-_Put_you_On.mp3.html

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thats the club single

basically im doin two albums threw an indie label called "Nurcha Records". One album is grimey (The Futures Infected;Darkness) and (The Futures Infected:light)
You can pre order these for only 7 bucks each (australian dollars...which is only 4 bucks american).

tell me watcha think, pre order here;
http://sarr.nurcharecords.com/

cheers

 

[Sarr]

replied to outal spirit and rukas' tracks

 

[Rukas]

I cant seem to get Try Me Master to work, but I think its RapidShare.

Im not really feeling Put You On, the flow is sloppy at times and the lyrics arent really anything special, but it is your generic club single so all good I guess. Your voice isnt too appealing either for club tracks I mean. You should probably stick with that generic Oz style instead of tracks that need a real smooth drawl like this because I just dont think this is really working for you.

"Its my voice I choose what I do with it" - Smartest thing Ive ever heard you say.

Anyway, yeah not really feeling this track. The beats alright and the hook is good but it just doesnt all come together well enough to be a club hit/single.

Ill peep your other shit as soon as I get the damn track to download.

 

[Sarr]

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cheers bro..the reason "try me" didnt wrk is because you cant download em at the same time..now that ya finished "put you on" it will work

thanks for the honest feedback

 

[Rukas]

^^ Alright thanks.

Try Me is better, I'd fuck with this beat. Your flow is better on it as well and your presence is better.


Your flow is coppy again, and your choice of rhymeing words is suspect sometimes, hill and castle does not rhyme no matter how you say it. It kind of gives this effect as if you were talking the verse at times and not really rapping or flowing.

But this is better, if you polished the hook a little, the talking between the TRY ME you could have a real banger on your hands, try to make it a little bit simple and catchier.

None the less its the best song Ive heard from you, but I still dont think you're ready to push albums.

 

[Shot 21]

I cant use rapidshare, is there any other way I can hear them?

BTW that album cover looks sicc! Lovin it.

 

[Sarr]

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add me on MSN harafias@hotmail.com

 

[True Thugz]

Can't listen to it right now. But I agree with the other dude. The cover is nice. You should get a better pic of yourself though I reckon. Wear a hat or a hoody. Justa suggestion.

 

[devils_advok8]

Aaaaaah, I remember you.It's the Egghead
Sup man, haven't seen you around in a while.
The links are not working for me neither.Can you upload them again?

 

[Sarr]

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hows it goin
anyway, goto the bottom of the page, and click "free" then on the next page, scroll down and wait for the countdown to hit 0, then it lets you download it

try that

 

[Sarr]

i got this feelin 50 is holdin him (and the rest of the unit) from goin all out with a proper diss track

 

[rebelofthadevil]

I liked it. "Try Me" has that raw and rebellious feeling with a sick beat and and angry feeling that gives it amp. The content is very interesting which keeps me listening. Nice drop.

 

[Sarr]

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thanks man...in all seriousness, not to sound like a car salesmen, but the whole "darkness" album has tracks with a grimey feel to it...for only 7 bucks (which is 4 for you guys) pick up the album...if ya dont like it ill personally send ya your money back by mail

 

[crittaz]

try me -
not feelin the hook at all. beats ok. the overall sound just does not really appeal to me

put you on -
not feelin this beat too much either. the hook is pretty nice but i gotta agree with rukas that the voice doesnt work that well with a club track.

 

[Bigg Limn]

Ill check these when I get home

 

[Mase]

I fucking love the concept for "Try Me Master", I agree with that track 100%. Your flow is a bit sloppy sometimes but overall it is pretty good, I didn't like the start or the hook much. The beat is dope and your verses are pretty good. I can feel the content and understand exactly what you are on with this track. Your presence, charisma and delivery are good. I might have to show this to my mates, I'm sure they'd dig it haha.
Fuck the police and good drop.

 

[Sarr]

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cheers mase, if ya like it cop the album bro (the dark one - you wont like the light one)

 

[Bigg Limn]

Try Me Master
Damn...quality's a bit harsh. Flow needs work, not quite on beat/not quite off...U need 2 fix that. Need 2 ride the beat a lot better or else ur flows gunna stay borderlined [and thats not good cuz it switches from off 2 on like I said]. Need 2 work on pronounciation 2, its a bit hard 2 make out at times - altho that could easily be the quality. Beat's pretty nice, fits the subject/feel. Not feelin the hook...i'unno, this all jus sounded really jumbled 2gether...jus all over the place. Again tho that could jus be the quality not allowing you to properly get in2 the song

Put You On
Wow...nah U really need 2 ride the beat on this typa song or else u gunna notice its off beat and U can tell on this. Lyrics...meh its a club track aint much else 2 say. Hooks pretty nice, she fits the beat well I like it...sounds Middle Easternish with the beat so that works well. Beats pretty nice 2, definately a club banger.

Overall U really need to work on ur flow, pronounciation, and quality before trying to push albums. I ain't sayin dont make em, but dont try to make people pay for em...U aint gunna make shit and ur music aint gunna get heard. Pass around free mixtapes and shit, showcasing ur skills and showing people ur music, that way Ull get people 2 hear it and usually U'll get criticism for it 2 which will help U grow as an artist.

Keep elevatin.

pz

 

[BIG J]

flow is pretty good ...rides the beat nicely...but many of the lyrics sound too basic...i think you could improve on your wordplay, and not filling up gaps in bars with swears, try different ways of getting words across , just some honesty, take it easy

peace

 

[Hymnz]

the tracks are decent, 5/10 for both. i liked try me master more, it had a better concept and was generally better in my opinion. repped for the songs