Once Again ---> Future & J-Deezy - Window Shopper

[future]

replied to limm and jetstar

Sup, it's future and I'm back again with a track that me and J-Deezy did off of both of our mixtapes...feedback would be much appreciated...holla.......


http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=3645493&q=hi

 

[Razorblade]

vocals are all messed up - the lyrics are too quiet and the ad-libbings overpowering everything. The quality needs sorted as well.
Lyrics are pretty impressive but for a battle track, you're not throwing a lot of punches, just talkin gangsta. Throw some punches and really bring the heat!

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beats horrible. Hooks aite. First dudes decent, solid flow...lyrics pretty weak tho. Quality sux 2, levels 2 low as well. 2nd dude flows a bit offbeat, delivery sux 2...2 much like 50 Cents. lyrics a lot weaker 2. Same problems w/ quality/level 2...altho quality was a lil clearer than 1st dude. Outros lame. Dont like this 1. Keep elevatin tho.

pz