Hot new track. Holla
I replied to Limn, Rukas, Ant.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/phoenixcrookedcrossmusic.htm
I replied to Limn, Rukas, Ant.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/phoenixcrookedcrossmusic.htm
PhoeniX CrookedCross - Born Loner
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thugz mansion beat nice for this subject , lyrics deep and flow
is nice once again , i dunno cant say i heard any downfall
in the verse , maybe in the second verse a lil slip but not
very noticable , i wusnt feelin the chorus , the words to it
are nice but the way its brought i didnt feel it , so to me
this song would be great with another chorus, good drop man
once again , keep em comin
is nice once again , i dunno cant say i heard any downfall
in the verse , maybe in the second verse a lil slip but not
very noticable , i wusnt feelin the chorus , the words to it
are nice but the way its brought i didnt feel it , so to me
this song would be great with another chorus, good drop man
once again , keep em comin
Yes yes, love this beat. :thumb:
Some nice lyrics, some real stuff there. However, I think this track lacks the polish that I've come to expect from you... I dunno, some of your proninciation sounds off maybe and a few slips in flow here and there. Saying that, though, it's still an enjoyable track, just maybe not up to your usual standards though.
Still nice... keep dropping, man.
Some nice lyrics, some real stuff there. However, I think this track lacks the polish that I've come to expect from you... I dunno, some of your proninciation sounds off maybe and a few slips in flow here and there. Saying that, though, it's still an enjoyable track, just maybe not up to your usual standards though.
Still nice... keep dropping, man.
thanx for the comments.
As for the hook, I never even meant to have a hook on it. lol
I was just playing around with the beat playing and my girl said it sounded ok. she also said I weren’t no Justin Timberlake but it sounded fine.
So I recorded it and put it as the hook. I think it sounds good. well, I like it.
But if you guys don't like it, then I guess your lucky that you never heard my version of TQs 'Bye, Bye Baby' lol now that song I sang my heart out. lol lol lol
But thanx.
but right now I'ma do to this post what a friend of mine (who’s 22) did to a thirteen year old girl a few weeks ago.
I'ma knock her up. So ^^^UP^^^^
As for the hook, I never even meant to have a hook on it. lol
I was just playing around with the beat playing and my girl said it sounded ok. she also said I weren’t no Justin Timberlake but it sounded fine.
So I recorded it and put it as the hook. I think it sounds good. well, I like it.
But if you guys don't like it, then I guess your lucky that you never heard my version of TQs 'Bye, Bye Baby' lol now that song I sang my heart out. lol lol lol
But thanx.
but right now I'ma do to this post what a friend of mine (who’s 22) did to a thirteen year old girl a few weeks ago.
I'ma knock her up. So ^^^UP^^^^
Man, that's wrong. 
groovin beat,you got some nice lyrics but your tone is trying to much for pac and your not pac so my thoughts is you was gonna flip it your way when oi heard the beat.overall good lyrism and i see a big pac influence in you.check out some of my beats in the beat club.i'm looking to put a mixtape together
Yeah, good beat lol. Flow is solid, delivery and emotion is nice. Lyrics R nice 2, feelin em a lot - can relate 2 a lot of em. Hook is a good idea but not sure if U got the best singin voice lol. Its not 2 bad, maybe add a chorus effect 2 it or somethin 2 make it sound cleaner. This is a nice track overall though, good topic that hits home 4 me. Good feelin throughout it 2 as I said.
Peace
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