PhoeniX CrookedCross - Love Me

#1
http://www.soundclick.com/phoenixcrookedcross

replied to IzzyWhite and Mark Deez

here is the lyrics

Female - Make my fantasy’s come true babe

[verse 1]
Now come girl, you don’t even have to ask
satisfaction will come nature if you let me be your man
I’m type to ride 4 you, live and even die 4 you
I’m the type to put you first and dedicate my life 2 you

I just wanna make you smile and see you happy
I’m bound to make mistakes, I’m a guy but don’t be made at me
I just need a good women to put me right
set me str8 when I make mistakes in life

cause since when do us guys get things right the first time
I ain’t perfect but I’ll try to be 4 you (hu!)
now come and hold me, lately I’ve been feeling lonely
slip out them clothes and come close to me

Start with the tongue kissing with the lights down low
I’ll massage your soft body by the light of candles (yeah!)
I’ll go deep but keep the details between us
me and you against the world, nothing will defeat us

I’ll be the one to keep you strong in the dark (yeah)
I’ll be the one to hold you when times are hard (yeah baby)
I’ll try to be everything you will ever need
& in return all I ask is that you love me


Hook


[verse 2]
look, I’ll for fill all your dreams and be there 4 you
in the good times and the bad I’m always gonna care 4 you
but you need to understand I’m giving you a broken heart
it’s damaged from when my ex tore it apart (dame!!)

It needs time to heal and grow strong inside
It can be yours if your willing to put in the time
it needs some TLC from a real women
I’m tired of little girls I need me some real loving (ha hah ha)

So come and hold me, wipe away my tears
fix the damage she’s done and keep strong through the years
and in return I’ll be you man and be loyal to you for ever
I’ll stay by your side and we’ll deal with life together

Just me and you against the world through the thick and thin
cause I thank god I found you deep with in this whirlwind
I’ll try to be everything you will ever need
& in return all I ask is that you love me
 

Bigg Limn

Well-Known Member
Staff member
#3
Baby U should let me loooove U...

aite whassup, beginnin sounds nice an very smooth. Verse soundin good, nice lyks, good flow/delivery...levels wouldnt be bad a lil bit lower - kinda overpower the beat. Hook sounds good but its way 2 empty...need some shit in the spaces, like the chick doin some freestyle shit or U talkin or somethin yknow. Overall that track pretty solid tho homie...I jus think it needs some filling elements to create a fuller track. Good shit tho homie, stay elevatin.
 

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