PhoeniX CrookedCross - Special feat Nate Dogg

#1
I did this for a girl I meet on the internet who has given me so much support over the last few weeks while I've been down.
She said in a chat on MSN she loves The Game so I thought I would do a track for her using one of The Games beats.

It's on my myspace page, Scroll down to the ipod style Mp3 player.
But it should play as soon as the page loads.
http://www.myspace.com/phoenixcrookedcross

Replied to Shot 21, killahill187um

Lyrics
[Chorus, x2 - Nate Dogg]
Girl ill do anything to make you feel special
Man its easy to see you special to me
Weather we lovers or friends we'll always be
I want you to know, your special


[verse 1]
Maybe, maybe it’s because you’re a caring person
Or maybe you feel my lost cause at some point you was hurting
Maybe it’s because you’re the first girl to show affection
Since my Ex broke my heart, walked away and left me

But you’ve made me smile and feel good for a change
Our chats online has helped me to deal with the pain
and the lost, I seem to struggle with daily
We barely know each other but girl you kinda save me

Sound’s crazy & I hate to come across as being needy
But I’m lying here alone and I’m having trouble sleeping
Just thought’s of your smile are running thru my mind
& I wonder what if I meet you some where offline

Would the sparks fly? Would the chemistry be felt?
and would you mind if I offered to take you out
your beautiful even though you kinda short
your 5'1, but given a chance I’ll make you feel 10 feet tall


[Chorus, x2 - Nate Dogg]
Girl ill do anything to make you feel special
Man its easy to see you special to me
Weather we lovers or friends we'll always be
I want you to know, your special


[Verse 2]
I can’t help but wonder if you feel the same
or if you look at me as a friend, but either way
I promise I’ll be there for you any time you need me babe
cause you’ve helped me in way’s you’ll never know

You see my Ex really did do a number on my heart
She crushed my confidence & I questioned who I was
She made me insecure & got me soul searching
she got me crying and asking “am I a good person?”

I hit rock bottom, alone in the dark
But you’ve started the process of healing my heart
You smile alone makes me believe in a better tomorrow
So I’m here for you babe thru the pain and sorrow


[Chorus, x2 - Nate Dogg]
Girl ill do anything to make you feel special
Man its easy to see you special to me
Weather we lovers or friends we'll always be
I want you to know, your special
 
#2
Flows solid as usual up to the last two bars on the second verse; it sounds like you stretched out "smile alone" and then had to rush to get the rest of the bar and it continued on to the last bar whereas it woulda all fitted fine if recited in normal time but even at that, it's barely noticable and the track sounds (99%) flawless.
Content is nice; I can appreciate the sentiment. Delivery is nice too. It's another different style of track from you in a while which I like to hear.
 

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