PhoeniX CrookedCross - Weeded

#1
I did this one a few weeks ago. I was kinda high when I wrote it. I was kinda high when I put it to the beat & I think I was kinda high when I recorded it. lol
So it's no wonder I made a song about being high.
Before anyone asks. This is a true story. it happened on new years eve '98.
I was 17 and a big pot head.
hold on, I'm still a pot head. Lol
What the fuck am I talking about.?

Just check the track.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/phoenixcrookedcrossmusic.htm

PZ
Ps
I replied to jeremy, Rukas and Limn
I'll get around to putting a reply to every post in the dropzone as soon as I get a chance.
 
#2
beat is ok, nice and laid back.
good story telling, pretty mad story =)
good chours really catchy.
i like how you used 'three to the four' thing... works well.

talking at the end is good. nice track, some of the delivery was not 100% clear but i could follow it.
 
#3
This shit is fucking crazy, I love the beat.
I loved the way you took that five to the four to the three shit and twisted it.
oh shit, it's from that song tipsy. shit yeah, now I get it.
you don't drink, you smoke. so you don't get tipsy, you get weeded.
I feel that shit bro.
The story you dropping is sick as fuck. I love that part about wakeing up the next morning and creeping around your bros place. I been there.

Hot shit, I always swing by the dropzone to see whats happening and you always shine above everyone else. str8 up dog. u my nigga. Mush love, keep doing what you doing.
 
#4
I love the way you twisted up that Tipsy song and made it into a weeded version. They beat is ok, but could be alot better. Your flow is okay also. The chorus is pretty nice and I think you could make an intro to this song. I really like you accent also. This song overall is pretty nice. A 7 out of 10.
 

Bigg Limn

Well-Known Member
Staff member
#5
Beats pretty nice. Good way to flip up the style. Flow is solid, lyrics r cool. Though I didnt feel his hook and Im not feelin urs either, although U flipped it properly. lmao @ 3rd verse...15? ouch...thats some shit my brother would do lol (no pun intended). Not feelin this track though, you got betters. Everything was on point...but the hook really threw me off I guess.

Peace
 

Ant

New Member
#8
Pretty nice track, all though I'm not really a fan of the beat or the hook... man I hated that J-Kwon track. But you show some nice story telling skills here and your flow is nice. So technically, it's good... but not really my style. It's still listenable though. :thumb:
 

Emma

Well-Known Member
#10
lol cool chorus. I love the beat. Nice voice, I'm glad you keep your accent ;)
Flow's good, nice lyrics.

I'm glad you used this beat instead of the tipsy beat lol.

Nice drop. Enjoyed it :)
 
#12
beat is cool , i like it , yeah flow sounds weeded lol its
a lil sloppy or atleast sounds like it but it adds to the vibe
of the song actually lol so its cool , hypnotizing shit,
well the topic who cant relate ,we all can lol lyrics are okay
so yeah nice stuff man,keep em comin/

btw tnx for adding me in ur link section :cool:
 

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