SkitzoFreniak - Let Me In

[SkitzoFreniak]

sup yall , not everyone will feel this southern crunk
beat and the style is different from wut i normally use
,well wus fun doing this lol , im interested wut u guys
think about it ,any feedback is appreciated...

ive replied to every drop here i think...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/skitzofreniakmusic.htm

pz

 

[imported_MAKaveli_10]

I like the beat. Your lyrics are pretty nice. I like the second verse the best. Your chorus is really good too. But your flow doesn't seem right on the beat. Your beat seems right only on the chorus. Overall I give this track 7.5 out of ten.

 

[Bigg Limn]

Damn...you really gotta stick 2 ur regular flow - flippin it fast ain't for everybody. The hook is really jumbled up, all over the place. Verses are pretty much on point flow wise though, delivery isn't as raw as usual, lackin that emotion. This sounds like a real ruff cut of a track (I see it says "preview")...after the 2nd verse it just seems scattered structure wise. Not feelin this one man, I'd save this for a mixtape or something until you can clean it up, rather than ur album - you should save solid tracks for those. It's good to show some versatility and experiment with different ideas, but this really ain't ur style imo.

Peace

 

[Sith Angel]

I don't really feel the beat. it's got a scarface sample in it. I think, I like that part but, it's just not my style.
Lyrically, like always you come tite but this style of flowing isn't you.
it's good to try different things but sometimes it's best to stick to what you know. feel me.
like Limn said, I can see this on a Mixtape but not an album. if you really want this on your album I'd say you need to rewrite it in parts so it fits better on that beat.
but it's not a bad drop, it's pritty dame good. But it's not up to the level of your other tracks.

I'll holla at cha when I get some free time about are Collabo.

 

[SkitzoFreniak]

ahh tnx for the feedback guys and pretty cool to see yall
are "concerned" with my album lol , actually that song
came good on ppl that arent really into hiphop ,they said
they liked it and the ppl that are into it have the same opinion
as u guys lol , i dunno if its gonna end up on there depends
wut songs iam gonna bring out,maybe makin me a whole
album with "alternative" shit ...

oh and sounds cool phoenix , no rush man

BUMP

 

[crittaz]

yeh the style doesnt really fit you. the chorus is all over the places. and the verses get sloppy a lot. its cou that ur trying sumthing new. and if done correctly i could actually see u pulling off a song like this. but it needs a lot of work.

 

[Emma]

The beat is ok.
I guess if you've experimented a bit it's not perfect but if you try doing this again you'll improve.
There's a bit in the middle before the chorus comes in for the 3rd time that I really liked. That chorus was actually growing on me as the song went on lol.
Not bad