Universal Soldiers/ Thinkin' Back

[Tru Principle]

What up y'all, this is a track with me and my homeboy Zom-B. Check it out, appreciate your feedback in advance.

http://s3.youshareit.com/files/81190ec3e4222ab3c86daed50fc6c6fa.html










Replied to "Drop Another Bomb" and "Real Talk"

 

[LarssonO7]

I loved it man, I think for a first track together it worked out really well. Lookin forward to see both of you improve as you record more.Like I said, a solid hook could have made this even better but consideing its a first track, it was well done :thumb:

 

[Pacaveli-T]

really good tru you sound nothing like what i expected (in a good way) :thumb

anyways good stuff you guys make a good team.

 

[ShortCut]

nice track kareem..i like it

 

[ShortCut]

the flow of tru principle is tight on it,i like it bro,layed back but nice n in the mood of the son,never heard u like this b4 but u got the style bro,plus i know what u talkin about in the song coz we sorta experienced that shit 2gether hehe so am totally feelin u,and zom-b came nice too,flow is str8 n good lyrics,u 2 sound good 2gether.

 

[Lowridah]

it's cool, i really like the flow of the second rapper
but the beat isn't my thang

 

[Amara]

Nice track, Kareem. I liked the beat, Shortcut is right - it's laid back. You flow is balanced and you have a strong voice but if I can give you any feedback to work with, I'd say add even more emphasis to your words because it's a strong message your giving out, so don't hold back delivering it.

 

[Rukas]

Reminds me alot of Never Forget which is good Reminds me of Napo especially the way you say strroonger in the first verse.

Id turn the first verses vocals down a touch. Also double up on your words like Zom-B did, this will take care of putting more emphasis on things.

Ill track. Beat is good, but at the same time its not, its weird lol.

I like.

Props.

 

[Sith Angel]

Rukas is right, you sound like Napo.
The beat sounds kinda weak but it kinda works for the theme.
The over all Quality is real good.
it seems like very body up here is increasing there game. Dame nice mayen.

The both of you come real tite on this track.
Get your self a soundclick page cuz I would love to hear some more from you bro.
I'ma keep this track. I'm really feeling it.

Keep it up and keep dropping.
Holla back on my new drop 'Lifted Up'

 

[Tru Principle]

LarssonO7; homie thank you for your input dawg. This is infact our first track together, and my first recording at my house… so I’m still workin’ on all the glitches of home recordin’ : P and about the hook, we didn’t really put much thought into as to we just wanted to see what we could potentially achieve on the same track…and I’m gald you liked it

Pacaveli-T thank you for your feedback, and I will take that as a compliment =)

ShortCut yeah my brother I know you know what I mean but sadly it’s like too many homies you used to be cool with you no longer cool with… Can’t count them on my hands man, too many….

Lowridah thanks for takin’ a listen, glad you were able to feel it despite not likin’ the instrumental…

Amara thank you dearly for replyin’ and you’re definitely right that’s something I did notice when you said it… I’ll make sure to keep it in mind next time I record a track like this.. =) Besides addin’ emphasis only strengthens the message, so thanks!

Rukas my main man, thanks for the feedback bro and you’re right about the mixin’… like I was tellin’ Larsson, im still tryin to figure that aspect out : P but thanks for listenin’ never the less.

Sith Angel really appreciate your reply dawg, I’m glad you like the track. And yes seein’ as we got some positive feedback on our first track together we’re in the process of makin’ more tracks… we’ll surly keep everybody posted on what we droppin’ =)

Again thanks to everybody for takin’ the time to listen and droppin’ some knowledge! =)

 

[Zom-B]

Just Thought I'd drop a message in here to say thanks for the feedback. We gonna keep it commin beliiiive that.

 

[Razorblade]

Production's fantastic on this track; love the beat - that guitar work is fuckin beautiful.
Love the concept of the song; you didnt waste the potential of the beat which is commendable.

First Verse: I feel the lyrics but there's something missing from the delivery in the very beginning when your talking about drinking too much and that but it picks up shortly after. Like the end of the verse tho how your easy to find but he wont see you - beautiful.

Second Verse: Delivery and flow are fantastic. Lyrics are simplistic but say alot if you know what I mean: "Used to play with us as kids but now your living in my head"; that's touching.

I love the track fellas; production and that are tight but I just cant shake the feeling that it's missing something like maybe some female vocals throughout; that'd add a whole other level to the song if you think about it. Like I said, hot track but its missing something. :thumb:

 

[Zom-B]

Production's fantastic on this track; love the beat - that guitar work is fuckin beautiful.
Love the concept of the song; you didnt waste the potential of the beat which is commendable.

First Verse: I feel the lyrics but there's something missing from the delivery in the very beginning when your talking about drinking too much and that but it picks up shortly after. Like the end of the verse tho how your easy to find but he wont see you - beautiful.

Second Verse: Delivery and flow are fantastic. Lyrics are simplistic but say alot if you know what I mean: "Used to play with us as kids but now your living in my head"; that's touching.

I love the track fellas; production and that are tight but I just cant shake the feeling that it's missing something like maybe some female vocals throughout; that'd add a whole other level to the song if you think about it. Like I said, hot track but its missing something. :thumb:

Thanks for the feedback, Yes. I've heard that one about the missing female b4 and You're definitely right. But it's hard to find one arround that actually sings good and fits in to it and aint actin all diva'ish wanting 5mil for doin it=D

 

[Bigg Limn]

Aiight this is the track I checked a while back I think if I remember correctly. Beats nice I like that real laid back groovin shit...who did it? First dude is flowin pretty solid not feelin the drug on flow that much though. Delivery is good over the beat. 2nd verse dudes flow is point, delivery seems pretty solid. Sounds a lil bit like Xero lol. Lyrics were simple but nice with the content. Real laid back track, pretty solid keep elevatin.

Peace

 

[Pezz]

Good job Kareem, Zom-B.

Tru like I told you on msn bro, something's missing. overall nice track 7.5/10