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Bigg Limn

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#5
For future reference - YES, in your initial post, also say who you replied to - "its not my job to look."

Onto the track...

wind is good...poetry is good - makes for a nice intro. Beat sounds nice, dunno why dude's sayin "Nasty Nas" though. Alright you really gotta work on ur flow. Its almost on beat - but not quite there. Real choppy. Delivery is real monotone and boring. Accent doesnt really hinder it 2 much - where R u from? Lyrics seem pretty basic, hook works 4 the track. Why do U shout out Nas & Naughty By Nature? Song structure is pretty good, but subject matter is pretty played - not my type of track. Keep elevating.

Peace
 
#7
I love the intro part, but I think I've heard this before somewhere.
The beats a killa. you get a real good street type of voice, but your flow is a let down.
it sounds like your reading it from your notepad. I'd recommend you memorize and practices your verses until it sounds perfect on the beat.

In whole, it's a good track, I would like to hear some more tracks from you.
I get a feeling you haven't been rapping for long but I can see loads of potential.
So keep at it bro and stay focused on sharpening your skills. feel me?

Don't forget to Rep and holla back on my new shit when I get around to drop it.

Pz
 
#8
Much love man...that shit was really inspiring for me.... nah mean...I just started rapping.....Alot people is tellin me that I gotta show more emotion and make my delivery more powerful...ima keep elevating and sharpening my skills....no doubt my nigga....I record all by myself and stuff because I dont got enuff money to go to a real studio and all that..so its only me that gotta decide if its good....thanx bro
 
#9
pretty much just like everybody else said as far as the lyrics goes you're straight....but your flow you need to work on that....and i'm not really feeling that beat...is it an original beat or did you jack it?
 

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